Not a Contemporary

pyramid outlines glazed against desert skyline castles and teepees in recesses of her mind daydreams and nightmares she couldn’t shake through the modern world she tries to break feeling out of whack she struggles to look back knowing her present does not seem contemporary each incarnation is but temporary only a famous hypnotherapist finds a way her mind to untwist “Many Lives, Many Masters”* through time’s tunnel she falls faster discovering what had once been blocked now with the keys, past lives unlocked her love for Native American art born of memories carried not in her heart but in her eternal soul modern life just part of a whole now she knows why she’s not contemporary but feel no desire to be ordinary
*”Many Lives, Many Masters” was a best seller by Dr. Brian Weiss, who used hypnosis to uncover the past lives of a patient suffering from confusion and bad dreams. Entry for Joe’s “Contemporary” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/1/2012 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2012 3:05:00 PM
She's not the only one who remembers past lifes..do you? last line [feels] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2012 3:33:00 PM
Everyone who is a Brian Weiss fan please say I !!!! I! .....great poem, Carolyn...it is super descript and flows like none other...I still DONT GET WHAT IS A CONTEMPORARY POEM!!! Anyways, a hearty congrats, love always, Gwendolen
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Date: 1/21/2012 3:07:00 PM
Wow, I must check out this book - sounds fascinating.
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:52:00 PM
I've heard of the book, haven't read it. My last venture was with Edgar Cayce. I suspect that one day the subject will no longer be mysterious, but recognized as a fact of existence. LOve, daver
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:04:00 PM
Fantastic write Carolyn...I really love it! Like so many have said I too have to read this book! It sounds very good, my type of reading too! Your poem is my type of reading as well! I really liked the lines, "...discovering what had once been blocked, now with the keys, past lives unlocked..." what amazing two lines, kinda goes within the book doesn't it?! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:45:00 PM
Quite an interesting write Carolyn now you made me curious have to try and find the book.. I am sure Joe will like this ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:33:00 PM
Your rocking in the soup today Carolyn. The best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:28:00 AM
I see i am honored by an entry Carolyn, and it is certainly "thought provoking" thank you for supporting my contest..
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:28:00 AM
Sounds like a good book to read. The mind a mystery to so many. Enjoyed !!
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