Not a Breeze

not a breeze an owl hoots at the full moon Published in Autumn Moon Haiku Journal, issue 4:2 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/7/2018 10:08:00 AM

I am there. I have an owl, so it's easy to get me there, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2018 10:34:00 AM

LOL thanks for your lovely visit, Caren.

John Lawless

Date: 6/7/2018 8:36:00 AM

this one made me stop and pause a moment to reflect.....I guess that makes it one WICKED PISSA haiku.....

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thanks, John. A lovely compliment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2018 3:29:00 PM

I can picture it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/6/2018 6:43:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. The simplicity of haiku are so much fun. Especially when the reader follows through with the imagery.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/6/2018 2:29:00 PM

I love owls, but haven't heard one in a long time. Lovely image.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/6/2018 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2018 11:12:00 AM

I enjoyed this one . It reminds me of the owl that hoot here. Well written Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/6/2018 2:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/6/2018 10:47:00 AM

What a very witty haiku! The imagery is fascinating! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/6/2018 2:20:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Pandita.