Not a Breeze

not a breeze
an owl hoots
at the full moon



Published in Autumn Moon Haiku Journal, issue 4:2 2021

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:08 AM
I am there. I have an owl, so it's easy to get me there, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:34 AM
LOL thanks for your lovely visit, Caren.
Lawless Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:36 AM
this one made me stop and pause a moment to reflect.....I guess that makes it one WICKED PISSA haiku.....
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thanks, John. A lovely compliment.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 3:29 PM
I can picture it!
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thanks, Andrea. The simplicity of haiku are so much fun. Especially when the reader follows through with the imagery.
Krampe Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:29 PM
I love owls, but haven't heard one in a long time. Lovely image.
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 3:28 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated.
Sands Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:12 AM
I enjoyed this one . It reminds me of the owl that hoot here. Well written Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 10:47 AM
What a very witty haiku! The imagery is fascinating! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Pandita.
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