Abe Lopez Poet Haiku

Northern Scales

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                                              frosted mustaches----
                                        ICE blanketing miles of lake
                                              drilling fishing holes







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Jay Loveless June 10, 2010 at 10:52 AM Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3

Daniel Cwiak May 18, 2010 at 9:28 PM I've never been ice fishing...sounds cold! Nicely done for the miles of lakes. Dan C ps. What happened to your contest on the shoes? Did it end? I really had to think about that one, and then something came to me. Now I can't find your contest...

John Freeman May 16, 2010 at 12:10 PM Thanks Abe for your gracefull comment, and Awesome luck to you with this worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

May 16, 2010 at 7:07 AM Wonderful use of imagery. Captured the voracity of those that venture out on a lake in -20 weather to drop a line in the water. Of course most have stoves to keep them warm. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Raul Moreno May 15, 2010 at 11:40 AM Nice work on the Seasonal word, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Carrie Richards May 15, 2010 at 6:52 AM Thanks ....but no thanks!! I think I'll stay home by a warm fire, and drink hot chocolate....however, I'll be glad to cook the fish you catch!! LOL !!

Charmaine Chircop May 15, 2010 at 5:01 AM Awesome poetry,those mustache did it all,lol. .Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 14, 2010 at 7:57 PM Cool write Abe ..good luck in the new Haiku contest.. funny first line .. enjoyed ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire May 14, 2010 at 7:47 PM Now that's a unique and creative winter scene. Always did want to try the ice fishing, Abe, but was afraid my mustache might get frosted. LOL Love, Carolyn

Margaret Foster May 14, 2010 at 7:44 PM I see them now. All huddled round the holes in the ice...good one Abe...Margaret