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Northern Scales

. frosted mustaches---- ICE blanketing miles of lake drilling fishing holes .

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Jay Loveless

Date: 6/10/2010 10:52:00 AM

Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/18/2010 9:28:00 PM

I've never been ice fishing...sounds cold! Nicely done for the miles of lakes. Dan C ps. What happened to your contest on the shoes? Did it end? I really had to think about that one, and then something came to me. Now I can't find your contest...

John Freeman

Date: 5/16/2010 12:10:00 PM

Thanks Abe for your gracefull comment, and Awesome luck to you with this worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Date: 5/16/2010 7:07:00 AM

Wonderful use of imagery. Captured the voracity of those that venture out on a lake in -20 weather to drop a line in the water. Of course most have stoves to keep them warm. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/15/2010 11:40:00 AM

Nice work on the Seasonal word, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2010 6:52:00 AM

Thanks ....but no thanks!! I think I'll stay home by a warm fire, and drink hot chocolate....however, I'll be glad to cook the fish you catch!! LOL !!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2010 5:01:00 AM

Awesome poetry,those mustache did it all,lol. .Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 7:57:00 PM

Cool write Abe ..good luck in the new Haiku contest.. funny first line .. enjoyed ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2010 7:47:00 PM

Now that's a unique and creative winter scene. Always did want to try the ice fishing, Abe, but was afraid my mustache might get frosted. LOL Love, Carolyn

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/14/2010 7:44:00 PM

I see them now. All huddled round the holes in the ice...good one Abe...Margaret