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Northerly

northerly breeze lay
heavy frost glistens in sunlight....
death  


Probably Haiku and Senryu mixed

deathhaiku

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Karen Croft

January 18, 2022 at 2:12 AM

very to the point! nice haiku!

Sara Kendrick

January 18, 2022 at 2:15 PM

Thank you, Karen, I appreciate the nice comment. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

January 15, 2022 at 11:16 PM

The last line makes this marvelous poem amazing Sara

Sara Kendrick

January 18, 2022 at 9:10 AM

Yes, the fact that we will face death is an eye opener. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Gershon Wolf

January 11, 2022 at 5:49 PM

Chilling! You've chilled me to the bone with a few selected words. Amazing, when you come to think of it, isn't it?! :) Gershon

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2022 at 3:07 AM

Gershon, Would you like some hot chocolate? It will warm you on a cold day? Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

January 7, 2022 at 1:57 AM

Frost can look beautiful but it's dangerous as well...Delice

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2022 at 3:40 AM

Go that right. Thank you for dropping by. Sara

Paul Callus

January 6, 2022 at 8:46 AM

Not all that glitters is gold!! Frost can be unfriendly and even worse! ~ Happy New Year, Sara!! // paul

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2022 at 3:37 AM

Paul, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jack Horne

January 6, 2022 at 4:50 AM

love this thoughtfully sad one

Sara Kendrick

January 7, 2022 at 3:34 AM

Thank you for the kind review. Sara

David Kavanagh

January 4, 2022 at 1:23 PM

Starkness personified Sara, I read your chat to Tom, and can see how your sister in law’s funeral was probably the catalyst for this pensive piece, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2022 at 2:09 PM

David, Thank you for your understanding. Yes, it was cold to us here in the south, but thank God the sun was out, and it warmed up a little from last night, so it was more comfortable for those who attended. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Sotto Poet

January 4, 2022 at 10:47 AM

Freezing is deadly. Excellent haiku. Happy Holidays and a Happy New Year!

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2022 at 2:05 PM

Thank you, Lasaad. Thanks for the Holiday wishes. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

January 4, 2022 at 8:43 AM

Frost kills. Lovely haiku. Happy and Healthy New Year.

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2022 at 9:42 AM

Victor, Thanks for dropping by. If the frost, we had earlier did not kill it this should have. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

Tom Cunningham

January 4, 2022 at 8:05 AM

Brr a chilful scene Sara, wouldn't like to be out too long Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom

Tom Cunningham

January 4, 2022 at 3:31 PM

My condolences to you Sara.

Sara Kendrick

January 4, 2022 at 9:40 AM

Tom, We are going to my husband's sister's funeral in a few minutes. We will miss her. She had the faith and was a faithful servant in her church work, as a wife, and mother. She influenced many young people in their walk with God. She had gone downhill with Alzheimer's Disease over the past few years, but she still was not as bad as it can get. She passed peacefully in her sleep Saturday night. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Northerly

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