noon moon

   noon moon~
            placid pale …
                      dull white —-
                                 sad shy \
                                                on sunny sky__
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Nicely illuminating how daylight outshines the moon in the sky.
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