Noodles

chopsticks
hand picks

noodles
oodles!

lips slurp
I burp

tummy
yummy



6 July 2019
Brian Strand Contest
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Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 5:56 PM
ohh, i see you won top slot, carly.. congrats and write more often... huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Carly. : )
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