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Nonliving Cm

I trip among sewage of lanes, Vacant parks, garbage junk Reveal this aimless wayfaring Arrogance tagged as pride— Drunk on caprice, humans become Wares used for amusement. Now emptiness haunts me alive An existence, rotting. Choose An Octavio Paz Line For contest--Nette Onclaud Aug 22, 2019 Line 3-- “… an alien life, a life unlived, not lively, hardly ours.”

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:47:00 PM
Jajosh, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/31/2019 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations. God bless you.
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Date: 8/30/2019 5:09:00 PM
You really did justice to that line . You picked a hard one to do too! Congrats for your deserved win.
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Date: 8/30/2019 12:53:00 AM
very few chose this concept, jajosh, and you held me till the end with your brooding, impactful lines... a pleasure to see this in my contest with my congrats for a superb win!...huggs
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