Nonet: Pain

When sun sets and dark born to spread,
then a man go to the river side,
and wait for whom, who never come.
In the end he backs with,
some past memories,
a broken heart,
tearing eyes,
and killer,
pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ajmal Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 9:58 AM
A very beautiful written poem, it s really difficult to live when someone betray you and worse asked you to come and never arrived at the scene however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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March 16, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Hi Raja, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
Shines Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:55 AM
nice write
Abbasi Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:31 AM
Thanks for visit and comment Kenisha shines.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 6:56 AM
Wooow .... Raja, this is a beautiful and touching poem!! - Welcome to P-Soup, hope there will be many more in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Abbasi Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Thanks for visit and comment Anne-Lise.
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