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Nonet: Pain

When sun sets and dark born to spread, then a man go to the river side, and wait for whom, who never come. In the end he backs with, some past memories, a broken heart, tearing eyes, and killer, pain.

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Date: 6/14/2017 9:58:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, it s really difficult to live when someone betray you and worse asked you to come and never arrived at the scene however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:15:00 PM
Hi Raja, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/14/2013 11:55:00 AM
nice write
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Raja Abbasi
Date: 3/22/2013 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for visit and comment Kenisha shines.
Date: 3/14/2013 6:56:00 AM
Wooow .... Raja, this is a beautiful and touching poem!! - Welcome to P-Soup, hope there will be many more in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Raja Abbasi
Date: 3/22/2013 6:29:00 AM
Thanks for visit and comment Anne-Lise.

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