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Nomads of the Rising Sun

Nomads of the Rising Sun ~~a homeless home invasion~~ We are nomads of this earthly plain, dining with dust and riveting rain Dancing with demons dictating pain, making stronger our ball and chain Under siege upon night, undercover and cold, a blvd sign in city’s light A penal colony in punitive plight, the surreal scenery of a selective sight Our breaths keep us warm during the semiconscious soporific storm Weathering away a contorted form, slowly scared by a slaving swarm Hunger keeps us alive, descending decomposing death, will we survive Sleepless nights in overdrive extending hands as they reach to thrive Sadness creeps with the falling snow, tears drop in the moonlight glow Kept company by a lonely crow, eating crumbs discarded long time ago Depression dives in deeper, for I am your brother, are you my keeper Wounded soul sleepless sleeper, don’t want to be a wandering weeper. Nov.10.2017 Depression and Sadness Sponsored by: Craig Hawkins

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Date: 11/21/2017 6:24:00 AM
I agree totally w/James ... Powerful, Deep and Spiritual poem, WW! Out of all your impressive poems I've read thus far, this one is my new personal fave. So full of truth and raw-to-the-bone depiction of reality expressed w/your signature lyrical pen voice. Simply beautiful beatitude poetry. I LOVE this poem! Supernova illuminating write. An instant PSoup classic. Love and joy always, my dear friend.
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Date: 11/21/2017 3:48:00 AM
Nice internal rhyme and smooth flow and of course deep content, well done WW.
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Date: 11/17/2017 10:05:00 PM
I dropped by to read this fine poem again!
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Date: 11/15/2017 10:43:00 AM
Hey...that top foto looks like me when I'm begging God...Wonderful poem WW...Glad you share those sentiments ...
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Date: 11/10/2017 7:21:00 PM
Awesome powerful imagery. Wow.
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Date: 11/10/2017 4:48:00 PM
Sad but beautifully written my dear friend "WW"... Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/10/2017 4:43:00 PM
Amazing, ^WW^.
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Date: 11/10/2017 3:36:00 PM
Winged Warrior, you have brought this pitiful plight into the light of raised consciousness with your magnificent write. So well written and rhymed - superb! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/10/2017 7:00:00 AM
Sadness rings true throughout this poem--rhyme so well executed, as always--title says a lot--best for a win, WW!
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Date: 11/10/2017 6:37:00 AM
I love the line: hunger keeps us alive. For sure, it is in the routine things, the jolt of our humanity, that we might attach ourselves once more to the living. Enjoyed the write!
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Date: 11/10/2017 4:43:00 AM
You have brought upon me great sadness with this incredibly well written poem my friend! This is a grandiose write, you have outdone yourself with this depressing piece...a perfect entry into the contest (It should do very well)! I am impressed WW, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 1:02:00 AM
Beautiful poem, and such a sad topic, you bring this to light very well.
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