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Nocturnal

notice the natural nocturnal of the night- never has the naked nighthawk nested as neat- neglected by dark, he nestles with grace and need. numb from twilight, he’s near. April 29, 2017

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Date: 6/1/2017 8:26:00 PM
Laura,this is a beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/13/2017 3:34:00 PM
Very natural and creative.
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Date: 5/13/2017 12:31:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2017 2:21:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Laura. Great use of alliteration! Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/12/2017 11:12:00 PM
Excellent Pleiades poem with unique imagery, Laura Loo! Congrats on your top win. :)
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Date: 5/12/2017 9:05:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 5/12/2017 8:53:00 PM
Great job, Laura! The picture fits perfect. Your words are expressed by its perfectly.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/12/2017 8:53:00 PM
Expressed by its eyes perfectly!!
Date: 5/12/2017 5:36:00 PM
Coming back with congrats, luloo.
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Date: 5/12/2017 5:18:00 PM
Beautifully written with excellent alliteration. Congrats on your 1st place win, Laura! Blessings, Kim
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/12/2017 5:34:00 PM
thank you so much! I am honored and adore these contests :) -luloo
Date: 4/30/2017 9:44:00 AM
Wow, there's a lot of N in your lovely pleiades!
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Date: 4/30/2017 8:19:00 AM
Unique and beautiful, Luloo:)
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Date: 4/29/2017 8:42:00 PM
Nice rhythm. GL in contest, Luloo!
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Date: 4/29/2017 5:05:00 PM
This was very creative! Love it.
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