Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Nocturnal

notice the natural
                       nocturnal of the night-
           never has the naked
           nighthawk nested as neat-
                          neglected by dark, he
                          nestles with grace and need.
                 numb from twilight, he’s near. 




April 29, 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 1, 2017 at 8:26 PM Laura,this is a beautiful poem.

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer May 13, 2017 at 3:34 PM Very natural and creative.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2017 at 12:31 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels May 13, 2017 at 2:21 AM Lovely imagery, Laura. Great use of alliteration! Congratulations on your First Place win! Regards, John.

Laura Leiser May 12, 2017 at 11:12 PM Excellent Pleiades poem with unique imagery, Laura Loo! Congrats on your top win. :)

Sushma A. Singh May 12, 2017 at 9:05 PM Congrats!

Jeremy Smith May 12, 2017 at 8:53 PM Great job, Laura! The picture fits perfect. Your words are expressed by its perfectly. Jeremy Smith May 12, 2017 at 8:53 PM Expressed by its eyes perfectly!!

Agnes Krampe May 12, 2017 at 5:36 PM Coming back with congrats, luloo.

Kim Merryman May 12, 2017 at 5:18 PM Beautifully written with excellent alliteration. Congrats on your 1st place win, Laura! Blessings, Kim Beautiful Scars May 12, 2017 at 5:34 PM thank you so much! I am honored and adore these contests :) -luloo

Agnes Krampe April 30, 2017 at 9:44 AM Wow, there's a lot of N in your lovely pleiades!

Joanna Daniel April 30, 2017 at 8:19 AM Unique and beautiful, Luloo:)

Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2017 at 8:42 PM Nice rhythm. GL in contest, Luloo!

Poetprentice Dupins April 29, 2017 at 5:05 PM This was very creative! Love it.