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Nocture Surfer

The pink honeycomb provided a mysterious grace, Warrior with a sloth-purse unclosed wound. Sargassum, barefoot hollow woman, As if such an object could meet my canonic sound. Soak my feet in cool moist sand, And juncture to the purple sunset over the sea-bound. Slowpoke chucklehead hump and heave its swarm, Create a hole in the caliginous maroon of the unfound. Until she's done and back to the ocean, I set and bout her unreal breath with the ground. This sea a ford motor stimulates altitudinous, It evokes in me how all designs breathe and drown. Ocean waves are noisy like the rain dexterously pours down.
Written: October 10, 2022
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Buhagiar Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 5:03 AM
I know a friend would have loved your poem. We are surrounded by waves especially now that winter is near.
Tor Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 5:54 PM
Your personification of the waves is wonderfully written my friend. Enjoyed reading...
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Beautiful imagery, Lasaad.
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 3:42 PM
you have succeeded in personifying every mood and wave of the ocean, you rocked the world of poetry today Sotto, well don :)
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Surfing the ocean waves--frolicking in fun!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Your poem depicts a plethora of imagery painted artfully by your golden pen, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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