Nobody Could Take Your Place

Nobody could take your place.
You have become intricately a part of me.
The thought of losing you brings me to tears.

You laugh, your smile, your love.
Those gifts you gave to me.
I am owed to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 14, 2009 at 7:09 AM
Wow, this is so sweet. I think most people long to have a love like this, to be loved like this. Well written and so peaceful. As I have said before, you have a great gift. Smiles from Lolita
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