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  Inspired by Joanna Daniel       Written on 6/18/2023

This tremendous feat God planned for my fate; I cannot wait, yet, if I sullen hate. How should I design and build such a boat to carry two of each, to stay afloat. Untamed, tame, small, large male and female beast; How do I gather and feed them at least? A global flood that everyone will drown if they do not plan, they will be pulled down. Do you hear them in the dark sky, it's true; Time is near and here they come two by two. The sun hides behind the dark clouds afraid As voices heard in moist cold wind; we prayed.

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Date: 7/4/2023 9:20:00 PM
Eve, I like how you wrote in first person! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/4/2023 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story about "Noah." I also wrote on Noah but it is so different. Great picture. One day we can talk with him. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 7/3/2023 3:56:00 AM
Another awesome and creative write my dear poet friend Eve. Congratulations on your win and this superb poem! Thanks for sharing and thanks also for the soupmail. Another soupmail please. Hugs
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Date: 7/3/2023 1:11:00 AM
A detailed writing on Noah. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/3/2023 12:30:00 AM
That is such a wonderful way to look at Noah's story, Eve, congratulations:)
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Date: 6/21/2023 3:28:00 PM
This is one of you best ever, Eve, If Noah had not followed Gods, word , not one of us would be here. Hugs Pangie
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Date: 6/20/2023 4:34:00 PM
Powerfully written Eve. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:41:00 AM
God will provide. Excellent meditation.
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Date: 6/18/2023 1:37:00 AM
Wonderful Eve, we’ll never know how Noah kept his boat afloat and his family plus all the animals alive, it’s amazing what the power of prayer can do… Belle
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:34:00 PM
Eve, Yes to two by two, it's raining again, and again. New beginnings wash all things clean of sin, it's raining again. -Richard
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/18/2023 12:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for your compliment and visit my friend. Hugs Eve

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