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Oh the thoughts in my head I wish would leave
The life I should have had the life I believed
What happened what did I do 
to deserve the lifelessness that you show through
Why don't you just leave this place please just go
Then existence will be mine again 
and once again in life I will believe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2011 5:38:00 PM
Thank you; hopefully one day I can write as well asyou and the many other writers on this site
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:34:00 PM
Writing a wonderful way to express your feelings, ain't it? Enjoyed.
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