No Thoughts

snow for days
is hypnotic serenaded by the wind
transforming 
from high white out to gentle falling
and back again
trees bending with weight
and the gentle flakes falling
falling
falling
lulls the quiet mind to stillness
no thoughts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 3, 2010 at 6:47 PM
I am feeling the snow in your poetry Veronica.. we still have it on the ground in N.J...wanted to say thankxxx for your wonderful comment on my blog about my son leaving for military duty to Iraq..appreciate your thoughts, prayers, and concerns.. between u and me.. I am a little bit of a basket case these past few days but he will be allowed to call me this weekend... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 26, 2010 at 9:14 AM
I have enjoyed reading your work today my friend....:JP]
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