No Tell Motel

There's a no tell motel
Just up the road a bit
It cherishes its secrets
Like a horse chomps on its bits

The rooms are small and squallid
With a queen size mattress strewn
Across the age worn carpet
That has stories to exhume

The walls have needed painting
Some twenty years or more
But dingy is as dingy does
The guests don't ask for more

And that wall mounted television
No antenna there for years
But movies still play on demand
They don't star Richard Gere

That old man at the counter
He's leering at some folks
But twenty's buys his silence
For all us respectable folks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Shiells Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Hi Brenda, This was unique and clever. Very good write:~) Thanks so much for sharing this with us here. Congrats on this being featured. Love and Peace, Deborah
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May 22, 2014 at 11:52 AM
BRENDA, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
Sergi Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Hi Brenda, nice to know you. You splendidly brought back an era that may not exist. This great poem poem should serve as a souvenir. Great Write.
Pen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:32 AM
If walls could talk I'm sure we would be let in on all the secrets. I'm sure walls wouldn't be corrupted by any twenties
Halliday Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:50 PM
Well done without being vulgar.
Guzzi Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Just stopping by to say Hi this evening it's been too long since I have read your fine verses. Light & Love
A  Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:27 AM
very cool write brenda Luv*Skat
Wayne Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:36 PM
That last line is a gut buster...classic good poem.
Hendricks Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:01 PM
hahaha. I had a good chuckle on this one. Nice one, Brenda. :))
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