No Tear's

My heart has been broken many times. 

And I had shead many tears.

But for the past few BRAKE UP'S my heart has been broken.

But no tears to shead.

I do weep at night when I think back at all the good times we had.

But when the brake up come's face to face I don't cry.

But I do feel miserable, and helpless, and very ticked off.

     I don't know what to do.?

*comment if you have any advice ( or any thought)*

                -Angel4eva23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/5/2011 3:10:00 PM
"Behind every raindrop the sun will shine" I jus wrote that for you, I hope it helps...
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:05:00 PM
Hi, Brittany~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/10/2010 4:23:00 PM
Brittany, always a pleasure to read your poetry! breaks up's are always hard. Hope you are better now, that i read a good poem from you earlier.. later ,..p.d.
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:57:00 AM
Hah, ive totalllyyy been here...it sucks, when our emotions do this to us.
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Date: 9/12/2010 12:47:00 PM
I like this poem because of what it implies: the defensiveness we have when face with an emotional situation. We react coldly, when in fact we feel very different. Enjoyed another one of your writes.
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Date: 9/10/2010 6:35:00 PM
break-ups and lost love are where a lot of good poems come from Brittany. Unfortunately they are a part of life. It is a lucky soul that finds true love the first time. Just remember, there is someone out there that will never break your heart, never do you wrong. There are still good souls in this world...Lewis
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:35:00 AM
This poem has great potential. Edit spelling, a dictionary can pour light into a heart. It speaks of a human quality that make poets great, especially when poems become our living tears. LOL
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