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No Sunshine Without You

Maybe one of these days I’ll get over you Start afresh..live anew But each day now seems cold with little hue No sunshine my love..No sunshine without you Everything has come to a standstill Only emptiness prevails that no one can fill Hopelessness has struck me like a plague Life suddenly is so bleak…so vague I walk in the rain hiding tears Like a scene out of my worst fears I know I’ll never find a love so true My wasted heart will keep missing you But I have gotta keep walking…make it through Try to start afresh..live anew Its killing me to live the cold days without hue(you) No sunshine my love..No sunshine without you

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Ivy Vresk

Date: 5/20/2012 2:45:00 PM

sad yet so beautiful, well written,I love your poem,dear Aakanksha,Ivy

Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/24/2012 8:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Ivy :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Sharma. Love, Carol

Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/18/2012 8:12:00 AM

Thanks Carol :) It feels great!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/15/2012 8:30:00 AM

I like how you repeated lines from the first stanza in the end one. It really empasized the sadness that way. Congrats on your poem being featured this week :) (btw, not an ABC poem, just rhyme)

Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/18/2012 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much for your encouraging comments :)

Black Eyed Susan
Date: 5/15/2012 8:31:00 AM

And welcome to the soup :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/13/2012 8:26:00 AM

"Good poem. I can't imagine how it would be like. Hope you can find the strength within you to move on. Love, Toquyen"

Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/13/2012 1:21:00 PM

Thanks :)