No Sunshine Without You

Maybe one of these days I’ll get over you
Start afresh..live anew
But each day now seems cold with little hue
No sunshine my love..No sunshine without you

Everything has come to a standstill
Only emptiness prevails that no one can fill
Hopelessness has struck me like a plague
Life suddenly is so bleak…so vague
I walk in the rain hiding tears
Like a scene out of my worst fears

I know I’ll never find a love so true
My wasted heart will keep missing you
But I have gotta keep walking…make it through
Try to start afresh..live anew
Its killing me to live the cold days without hue(you)
No sunshine my love..No sunshine without you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/20/2012 2:45:00 PM
sad yet so beautiful, well written,I love your poem,dear Aakanksha,Ivy
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Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/24/2012 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Ivy :)
Date: 5/18/2012 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Sharma. Love, Carol
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Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/18/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Carol :) It feels great!
Date: 5/15/2012 8:30:00 AM
I like how you repeated lines from the first stanza in the end one. It really empasized the sadness that way. Congrats on your poem being featured this week :) (btw, not an ABC poem, just rhyme)
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Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/18/2012 8:13:00 AM
Thanks so much for your encouraging comments :)
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Black Eyed Susan
Date: 5/15/2012 8:31:00 AM
And welcome to the soup :)
Date: 5/13/2012 8:26:00 AM
"Good poem. I can't imagine how it would be like. Hope you can find the strength within you to move on. Love, Toquyen"
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Aakanksha Sharma
Date: 5/13/2012 1:21:00 PM
Thanks :)
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