Christuraj Alex Poet Cinquain

No Suicide

Sadness
Like the sachet
Of a detained schoolboy
Taunt, tease, thrash, threaten, terrorize
Sadly

Sadly
Sachet full with
Colorful memories
Captivate, caress, convince, cure
Serene

Serene
Sadness gives way
Sachet memories soon
Savors secure, smoothes shines, shields, saves
Smoothly

4 August 2021

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Sara Kendrick August 6, 2021 at 2:45 PM Congrats on this winner. Way to go. This is a topic that needs to be talked about so that people will know what to look for in a person who could be on the verge of this act. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Christuraj Alex August 6, 2021 at 8:30 PM Thank you very much.

Greg Gaul August 6, 2021 at 1:09 PM What an interesting and unique form you've created here. One that has its own rhythm. Adverbs an all. Well done. Congrats. Christuraj Alex August 6, 2021 at 8:29 PM Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman August 6, 2021 at 9:46 AM Very very creative Chris. Delightful formatting in your poem of the process to go from darkness to light, from despair to serenity and the choice to live! This would be wonderful to share with teens! Congratulations! Christuraj Alex August 6, 2021 at 11:26 AM Thank you very much.

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Aniruddha Pathak August 6, 2021 at 7:05 AM A beautiful bouquet of Cinquains, well done Alex, and congrats for First Place Christuraj Alex August 6, 2021 at 7:13 AM Thank you very much.

Curtis Johnson August 6, 2021 at 5:44 AM Congrats. Very well done. Beautiful connection and flow. Blessings. Christuraj Alex August 6, 2021 at 6:41 AM Thank you very much.

Brian Sambourne August 5, 2021 at 10:28 PM A superb connective merging of 3 cinquains. Congratulations! Brian Christuraj Alex August 6, 2021 at 6:42 AM Thank you very much.