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No Suicide

Sadness Like the sachet Of a detained schoolboy Taunt, tease, thrash, threaten, terrorize Sadly Sadly Sachet full with Colorful memories Captivate, caress, convince, cure Serene Serene Sadness gives way Sachet memories soon Savors secure, smoothes shines, shields, saves Smoothly 4 August 2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2021 2:45:00 PM

Congrats on this winner. Way to go. This is a topic that needs to be talked about so that people will know what to look for in a person who could be on the verge of this act. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/6/2021 8:30:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Greg Gaul

Date: 8/6/2021 1:09:00 PM

What an interesting and unique form you've created here. One that has its own rhythm. Adverbs an all. Well done. Congrats.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/6/2021 8:29:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/6/2021 9:46:00 AM

Very very creative Chris. Delightful formatting in your poem of the process to go from darkness to light, from despair to serenity and the choice to live! This would be wonderful to share with teens! Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/6/2021 11:26:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/6/2021 7:17:00 AM

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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/7/2021 2:38:00 AM

Thank you very much.