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No Sign of Rain

 The sky offered no sign of rain
 No pitter patter songs were heard
 It seemed flowers would wait in vain
 The sky offered no sign of rain
 There was just a dusty refrain
 No nimbostratus were stirred
 The sky offered no sign of rain
 No pitter patter songs were heard

 5-22-2024

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/27/2024 12:18:00 PM I have always enjoyed this form and you certainly did it justice here Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/28/2024 5:37:00 AM I am wondering if where you live there is lack of rain. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara K Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/25/2024 3:24:00 AM Your triolet is very imaginative. We need rain, alas. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 5/23/2024 7:58:00 AM Hello Joseph, Your poem is hauntingly beautiful. The imagery of a parched landscape waiting in vain is so evocative. Your words capture the essence of longing and the stillness of unmet expectations. It's a powerful piece that is deeply felt. —your work is truly inspiring. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 5/22/2024 7:24:00 PM You long for that soothing melody, especially when you're in a drought. This is so beautifully expressed and presented. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 5/22/2024 2:43:00 PM I love this triolet. I always enjoy the repetition within. Perfection sounds to my ears. I'll fav it. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/22/2024 10:54:00 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "No Sign of Rain" write. I love hearing the rain... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.................. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/22/2024 8:27:00 AM It's hot and humid where I am as well. Longings for rain perfectly conveyed, Joseph. Login to Reply