No Secret (Reversed Verse)

For naught 
Tempt in darkness
That which the heart would not 
Have revealed by light un-harnessed--
Confess
~O~
Confess 
Have revealed by light un-harnessed--
That which the heart would not
Tempt in darkness 
For naught






Comments: You know what they say about whats done in the dark... Be well stay blessed
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August 18, 2008 at 5:58 PM
yes maybe everyone should say, Whats done in the darkness, Stays in the darkness, like Vegas,,, your words flow very well, I too like this kind of poem to me it is difficult to do and make it read well, to which you have done,,,blessings..Cecil
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August 16, 2008 at 2:13 PM
Love the format and style of this poem. Leads one to introspection and philosophical debate, my favorite type of poem. Well done. Love Heidie
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August 16, 2008 at 11:42 AM
YES RATE YOU 10 BUT SOEM SECRET ARE REAL AND THEY JUST HAD TO COME OUT SOME TIME IT BEST TO BE NICE BUT CHECK OUT MY WORK AND COME REAL
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