Nick Bagnall Poet Rhyme

No Salvation

One great betrayal, always destined to be
One fated man, who never will be free
Thirty silver coins, lying on the ground
Bought the field of blood, where strangers may be found

One lonely outcast, who was too blind to see
One final act, left him hanging from a tree
No salvation, for this man, who has sinned
Body and soul forever, twisting in the wind





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Kevin Pace July 23, 2010 at 1:15 PM very good! I like your phrasing, your choice of words is excellent (which is an oft overlooked talent. I'll point our a typo because I would hope to get the same in return... the first "to" in L5should be "too". Great work, great topic - Kevin

Grace Eunsong Lee July 11, 2010 at 7:27 AM Amazing poem. I love it. -G

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2010 at 9:22 PM wow, you captured the torment of Judas for sure. Very nicely done! andrea

Sara Kendrick June 15, 2010 at 4:44 AM Great testimony of your faith...Keep the faith pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Gavin Pattison June 14, 2010 at 7:09 AM A well written, thought-provoking poem. Regards, Gavin.

John Freeman June 11, 2010 at 10:12 PM An awesome tribute to the one who is worthy, Nick. I just noticed your last name is the same name of a Dam in Missouri. I am not sure if it is spelled the same way. A dam holds a lot of water, "water of the word" Smile. Thanks for your comments today. Have a nice weekend. Agape, Moses

Brian Strand June 11, 2010 at 7:43 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Nick.Rgds Brian

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2010 at 4:56 AM This is a chilling way to read of the betrayal of all times. Very provoking to go read this, at this moment, but when the fate of our world was written Judas could not unwind the terrible sin he cast. The torment of his betrayal got to him, and your poem perfects the moment upon his own death. Enjoyed and have a wonderful day,..Sidney LeeAnn

Sarah Hales June 10, 2010 at 10:30 AM That really grabbed me i like that sarah :-)