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No Salvation

One great betrayal, always destined to be One fated man, who never will be free Thirty silver coins, lying on the ground Bought the field of blood, where strangers may be found One lonely outcast, who was too blind to see One final act, left him hanging from a tree No salvation, for this man, who has sinned Body and soul forever, twisting in the wind Contest : POEM OF FAITH Unplaced Contest : 2nd Chance~! Unplaced

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2010 1:15:00 PM
very good! I like your phrasing, your choice of words is excellent (which is an oft overlooked talent. I'll point our a typo because I would hope to get the same in return... the first "to" in L5should be "too". Great work, great topic - Kevin
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:27:00 AM
Amazing poem. I love it. -G
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:22:00 PM
wow, you captured the torment of Judas for sure. Very nicely done! andrea
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:44:00 AM
Great testimony of your faith...Keep the faith pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:09:00 AM
A well written, thought-provoking poem. Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:12:00 PM
An awesome tribute to the one who is worthy, Nick. I just noticed your last name is the same name of a Dam in Missouri. I am not sure if it is spelled the same way. A dam holds a lot of water, "water of the word" Smile. Thanks for your comments today. Have a nice weekend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/11/2010 7:43:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Nick.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/11/2010 4:56:00 AM
This is a chilling way to read of the betrayal of all times. Very provoking to go read this, at this moment, but when the fate of our world was written Judas could not unwind the terrible sin he cast. The torment of his betrayal got to him, and your poem perfects the moment upon his own death. Enjoyed and have a wonderful day,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:30:00 AM
That really grabbed me i like that sarah :-)
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