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He saw the shoreline of his death Stared at sea's rolling wave Found the sky and sea's banding belt Asked God, honor his grave The red sun will warm his last breath Footprints he left on land Calmly he swims to setting sun His prints covered by sand Contest Let me feel your lines 3/27/15 Frederic Parker 2. shoreline

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Date: 5/17/2015 10:55:00 PM
Frederic, this is a Master Write and deserving of the first place slot, congrats on this beautifully dark winner!
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Date: 5/16/2015 12:02:00 AM
wow, I absolutely love this one. It's dark and gorgeously written. FAVE for this number one.
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:07:00 PM
Wonderful win, a 7
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:31:00 PM
Very impressive winning work..Way to go!!Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:15:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, inspiring and touching, Frederic. No wonder it came first! Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:02:00 AM
This is a beautiful write, and I'm pleased to have read this today. Congratulations, Frederic. Kim
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:38:00 PM
:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:46:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic. have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 3/29/2015 4:30:00 PM
Wow, inspiring words wrapped in beautiful imagery, Frederic! Best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:09:00 AM
Love this write Fredrick ... Good luck Bev :)
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Date: 3/27/2015 9:32:00 PM
Powerful imagery and emotion conveyed here, Frederic. Well done!
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Date: 3/27/2015 3:47:00 PM
such intense imagery Frederic - absolutely beautifully expressed - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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