No Remedy

It’s a tragic time  
When hearts do bleed
When a young  man lies dying
By another’s hand

We storm highest heavens
Cries of lingered pain
Wave of tears descending
And solidarity yearns

Gone too soon
Too soon to die
There’s no good reason ever-ever
What wasted lives

And it’s no remedy
To this senseless game
See no one's winning
And the piper plays on
But it’s no remedy
No remedy
It’s no remedy today

Silent detestation 
Follows the pain
Vicious circle appalling and hinders 
There’s no finding peace

To change the pathway
Let the young ones see
No hatred will heal them
When sanity’s lost

Gone too soon
Too soon to die
There’s no good reason ever
What wasted lives

~*~
Note:  The Song Title:  "Sacrifice" by Elton John/ Bernie Taupin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/23/2013 9:56:00 AM
You're right on point Anne. When is there a truly good reason? It seems it only causes more pain for both sides... I've never heard the Elton John song, howbeit, this is a wonderful work of tragedy... apt title as well.
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:37:00 AM
You picked one of Elton John's best songs, Annalise, and provided heartbreaking lyrics to it. I'm sure this will do well in the contest, dear. Going through such a rough time now, but remember I love you. Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:21:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Annalise. Wishing you the best in the contest. I want to do one for John's contest but am chicken to do it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:45:00 AM
This is a beautiful adaptation of Elton john's song. All the best.
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:46:00 AM
I don't know much about this song of sacrifice, but I did enjoy this write on no remedy
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:58:00 AM
I love this song and you did an excellent job with the song Annalise.. All the best for JH's contest ;) love
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:00:00 AM
a seering write with slices of grace, anna... wham!! just did one too for john entitled " funky angel babe" though a totally diffrent slant! love this!. :) hugggs, nette
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