No Regret.

My heart will keep on beating,
my lungs will fill with air.
I'm not going to spend the rest of my life,
wishing you were there.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2010 3:54:00 AM

Congratulations on going on into the second round with this great love loss work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/12/2010 12:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Rachel. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Nesma Alnsour

Date: 10/15/2010 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations on ur poem being featured this week, a beautiful poem well deserved! great job :)....Nesma

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/15/2010 11:35:00 AM

beautiful piece I can relate to, congrats on having it featured this week

Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 11:20:00 AM

Rachel, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2010 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured on homepage this week..Sara

Skat A

Date: 10/15/2010 9:21:00 AM

GOOD MORNING! RACHEL, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 10/14/2010 3:53:00 PM

this was a beautiful poem, well penned. i can relate to this, and thank you for posting it. congratulations on your feature, it was well deserved, see you around soup! this is going into my faves!! --Madison

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2010 1:14:00 PM

Rachel, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d. "

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 10/12/2010 6:40:00 AM

Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Rachel what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2010 3:38:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup ... a nice one to share with us all with luv..

Janette Fisher

Date: 10/10/2010 12:15:00 PM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/1/2010 10:30:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Rachel. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/31/2010 9:36:00 PM

good philosophy, nice write

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/31/2010 5:34:00 PM

such strength! oh yeah!!! love it! this is the soup at it's best! Rachel! goes to my fav's!!! and thanks for your comment on "winter sunrise" yes! I felt exactly that! you nailed my emotion and you felt it too! how cool is that!! it had been cold and dreary and overcast for weeks here in Minnesora, then BOOM! A CLEAR MORNING SUNRISE EXPLODED! JIMBO

Veronica Joseph

Date: 3/31/2010 5:05:00 PM

and yet in that small part of your soul you will miss him...really well done this goes in my favorites!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/31/2010 4:43:00 PM

So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Rachel and I can so relate to your special words of poetry too..just had an ugly breakup after years of luv and loving.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

No Regret.

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