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No Redemption

More than a year has passed since I saw your pretty face last, Time has slipped by way too fast But not forgotten despite the past Wish that I could take it back Change what took us so far of track Make up for the things I lack Too fix it all and repair the crack Our private world, gone for good hurting you, never believed I could Youve moved on as you should Id see you happy,I really would A much better life for you Id see Far greater than your life with me Thats your fate,with heavy heart I decree lamenting the lack of wisdom to forsee I know that Im the one to blame I have never felt so utterly ashamed Regret,Remorse, the pain remains Heart and soul forever maimed I think about you every day I try so hard to cut away better to have loved and lost or so they say A price in pain that I must pay One last note to my sweetest friend Guess this is it, this is the end My eternal love to you I send As into darkness I descend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/24/2017 1:37:00 AM
Wonderful monorhyme epr stanza, excellently done. A very deep, dark and painful poem you wrote, but you did so excellently. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Duncan Treasure
Date: 3/24/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much :)

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