No Promises

Hi. I'm here, I guess I'm ok. It's best that I stay away. I feel different everyday. Better wait 
to see if I do what I say. Don't want to let you down. No false hopes. No talkin around the 
problems. Got to solve them.  when I win you will know. Not a word will be spoken. So 
promises won't be broken.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Madeleine Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 11:49 AM
This is so true. It's better to wait for the action to be done, before we speak. Love it!
L Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 9:35 AM
I had a problem with making promises and end up breaking them. Not good at all, i found out that one should be to his word. Now when i make promises i do all i can to keep it. very nice poem
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Chad. Love, Carol
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