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No Promises

Hi. I'm here, I guess I'm ok. It's best that I stay away. I feel different everyday. Better wait to see if I do what I say. Don't want to let you down. No false hopes. No talkin around the problems. Got to solve them. when I win you will know. Not a word will be spoken. So promises won't be broken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/1/2009 11:49:00 AM
This is so true. It's better to wait for the action to be done, before we speak. Love it!
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Date: 11/1/2009 9:35:00 AM
I had a problem with making promises and end up breaking them. Not good at all, i found out that one should be to his word. Now when i make promises i do all i can to keep it. very nice poem
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:48:00 AM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Chad. Love, Carol
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