No Promise of Tomorrow Haiku X2

sun slowly sinking
drowning in a sea of night
today's dead and gone
onyx eastern sky
cock anxiously waits to crow
this day may not come
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Very expressive work..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:39 PM
None of us know the day the sun will no longer rise for us Arlene - thought provoking write:-) hugs jan xx
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