No Pressure (Reversed-Verse)

The trials ended
Judges turn their once leering eyes
Now, smiling at forms in the sky
Surely, love shall sing of you and I 
As they find the reasons why
No pressure…
Love wont be denied
o*~O~*o
Love wont be denied
No pressure…
As they find the reasons why
Surely, love shall sing of you and I
Now, smiling at forms in the sky
Judges turn their once leering eyes
The trials ended
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 30, 2008 at 4:42 PM
This is a real interesting format that strengthens the message through your repetition. Fitting title for the piece. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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July 22, 2008 at 11:05 AM
Love this form of poetry! Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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July 22, 2008 at 10:26 AM
Nothing or no one can be the judge of love. Beautifully written with lovely insight in this wonderful piece, Sara:)
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