No Plan

In the darkest depths of the ocean, 
That is where you will find me.
Lost among the others, 
No plan of being free.

As I look up into the sky, 
With all those stars looking back at me, 
I'm lost among the others, 
No plan of being free.

Now I sit alone and wonder, 
Whatever shall come of me, 
I will be lost among the others, 
No plan of being free.

No hope can help me, 
With no plan of being free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Murphy Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 9:46 AM
FREE YOUSELF FREE YOURSELF THAT IS THE PLAN WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP FALESHIA
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:09 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alexander. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 1, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. enjoyed..luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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March 1, 2010 at 8:24 PM
There is a deep sense of despair in this poem, Alexander. I hope the next time you look into the sky, you find a ray of hope. Beautifully written poem. Love, Carolyn
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