No Place Like Home

I do not live here
tell me this is not my home.
These walls hold no favor
for me; what have we become?
Is this the place of my childhood?
The walls seem so blue and cold
and sun doesn’t come through the window,
these memories are a fool’s gold.
The hallways still echo
with the sounds of their anger.
My skin tingles with the memory;
fear of oncoming danger.
These are the corner I hid in
to carve away the loneliness
from the place strangers called my home
for here, was homeless.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/11/2010 3:21:00 PM
Lonely is what this reminds me of... I have that homelessness too.. everywhere around the F@/7er
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 4:52:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this one ... smile love Jayne
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2010 2:37:00 AM
Smile ~ Stop by & say hello sometime for old times sake; I would truly love that &, I would also love to see "Your beyond Beautiful Verse; Sooo Rare;" spilling from the tip of "Your Wonderous Pen" once more &, blessing Everyone here at Poetry Soup ~ "Stay Beautiful & Bright 'Dear Lovely Madison Thomer' &, Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Days Amid, 'The Arms of Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Precious Madison!":) ~
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2010 2:27:00 AM
Smile ~ As "You & Sara 'Dear Beautiful Madison;' So Captivating & Compelling &, So Easy To Care For; So Easy To Love; 'Beautiful Hearts & Souls,' Poured Upon The Pages, 'Like Beautiful Gold!!!'" ~ I miss "You Madison," I truly do &, I hope "Your" doing well ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ ....Cont:)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2010 2:17:00 AM
Smile ~ I remembered how very profoundly gifted & unique "You Are" &, how much "Your Splendors" reminded myself of another "Beautiful Poetess Named Sara Lokken" ~ Both sooo very rare & extremely amazingly stirring &, only a few I have Ever seen have been able to reach the core centers of "Their Beautiful Souls" ~ ....Cont:)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2010 2:07:00 AM
Smile? ~ Another verse risen from the depths of "Your Beautiful Soul, 'Dear Beautiful Madison Thomer!!!'" ~ I wished to stop by because I was thinking about "Your Beauty" the other day & hoping that "Your Treasures" were doing alright because, I do not see "Your Gifted Brilliance" post much anymore & ~ ....Cont:)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/28/2010 5:03:00 PM
Very intense and creative write Madison.. check out the contests offered and enter.. and good luck..with luv on this happy weekend..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/28/2010 1:09:00 PM
a very moving and touching poem,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/28/2010 11:46:00 AM
being homeless is a fear...I never had when I was a child since we had family.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad