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No Place Like Home

I do not live here tell me this is not my home. These walls hold no favor for me; what have we become? Is this the place of my childhood? The walls seem so blue and cold and sun doesn’t come through the window, these memories are a fool’s gold. The hallways still echo with the sounds of their anger. My skin tingles with the memory; fear of oncoming danger. These are the corner I hid in to carve away the loneliness from the place strangers called my home for here, was homeless.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 3:21:00 PM
Lonely is what this reminds me of... I have that homelessness too.. everywhere around the F@/7er
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:52:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this one ... smile love Jayne
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:37:00 AM
Smile ~ Stop by & say hello sometime for old times sake; I would truly love that &, I would also love to see "Your beyond Beautiful Verse; Sooo Rare;" spilling from the tip of "Your Wonderous Pen" once more &, blessing Everyone here at Poetry Soup ~ "Stay Beautiful & Bright 'Dear Lovely Madison Thomer' &, Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Days Amid, 'The Arms of Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Precious Madison!":) ~
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:27:00 AM
Smile ~ As "You & Sara 'Dear Beautiful Madison;' So Captivating & Compelling &, So Easy To Care For; So Easy To Love; 'Beautiful Hearts & Souls,' Poured Upon The Pages, 'Like Beautiful Gold!!!'" ~ I miss "You Madison," I truly do &, I hope "Your" doing well ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:17:00 AM
Smile ~ I remembered how very profoundly gifted & unique "You Are" &, how much "Your Splendors" reminded myself of another "Beautiful Poetess Named Sara Lokken" ~ Both sooo very rare & extremely amazingly stirring &, only a few I have Ever seen have been able to reach the core centers of "Their Beautiful Souls" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:07:00 AM
Smile? ~ Another verse risen from the depths of "Your Beautiful Soul, 'Dear Beautiful Madison Thomer!!!'" ~ I wished to stop by because I was thinking about "Your Beauty" the other day & hoping that "Your Treasures" were doing alright because, I do not see "Your Gifted Brilliance" post much anymore & ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/28/2010 5:03:00 PM
Very intense and creative write Madison.. check out the contests offered and enter.. and good luck..with luv on this happy weekend..
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Date: 8/28/2010 1:09:00 PM
a very moving and touching poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/28/2010 11:46:00 AM
being homeless is a fear...I never had when I was a child since we had family.
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