Aly Grey Poet I do not know?

No One There

I fell so deep but no one was there to catch me fall,
No strength present and love so absent,
A pain that forever would go on,
Shattered bearing and severed ties, a high heart’s decent.

Down below where nothing lays no one there to assist,
Falling hard; fast and deep into what’s unknown,
Your words help to slit  an already cut wrist,
No on one there to outstretch a hand for me to hold.

Knocking upon a door that fails to open; hopes and dreams are crushed,
No one there to reassure my pains are real and forever here,
Breaking down ties that shouldn’t have existed: relations that were rushed,
Love is for fairytales and happy endings are pretend and end with tears.

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Aly Grey July 11, 2010 at 4:06 PM Thanks n its a bit of both you kno!

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2010 at 11:27 AM Very deep, and sad,hope it is just a poem, and not reality. For sure reality is an ugly emotion to write on paper. Still it is a very good write,enjoyed the deep pain in your poem,..p..d.