No One Knows I'M Crying

No one knows I'm crying way deep down inside because I keep laughing and smiling so 
no one will know.
No one knows I'm crying just to belong, trying to make friends but keeping my distance 
never letting my guard down, never really trusting no one to come inside not wanting 
to be hurt again. 
No one knows I'm crying trying to find a place in my heart to forgive and forget past 
mistakes.
No one knows I crying wondering why you had to go and leave me alone.
No one knows I'm crying trying to find the inner peace I need to survive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/30/2010 8:50:00 AM
so this is your first poem? im new here too. this poem is in my favorites.
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:57:00 PM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/29/2010 12:57:00 PM
I think we all wear a mask of happiness sometimes to keep our selves safe. It is easier to hide the pain than having to share it and feel it more than we already do. I have done the same thing and did so for a long time after my divorce. Sad poem but one I think many people can relate to.
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lena. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:26:00 AM
great write im actually feelings like this right now, but hey just remember that while one door closes God will open another one!
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:04:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... enjoyed reading your creative write today..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:50:00 AM
This poem tells me exactly. its very nice. good job
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