Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

No One Is Home

Walking in wishes, dreamily dazed
(Unaware of the sleeping Dragons)
Loathing my Heart and its wicked ways
(Endless in holes, abysses and chasms)
Oh, where in space do I belong?
Intent to repent, but trapped in wrongs
Our lives are lies we thus surmise-
The pain- forever prolonged

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Robin Davis October 24, 2013 at 7:40 PM Chan This is a great write full of feeling and sadness which makes the reader feel your heart and soul. Nice job my friend The comment on my King of Stupidity poem was great and flattering. If you keep commenting me my cheeks are going to be redder than a lobster. LOL Hugs Just That Archaic Poet October 24, 2013 at 9:07 PM Many thanks and much love to you <3

April Gabriella September 1, 2013 at 4:24 PM I love this. It is overflowing with emotion and those are my favorites to read. This is wonderful and I read it over and over. :) Just That Archaic Poet September 1, 2013 at 7:27 PM That's one of the best compliments a poet can receive. Thanks, April; glad you enjoyed :)