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Fog from age settles in Like a gloaming of night Smothering from within Extinguishing all light Greg Hoffman 9/22/2015 Contest: Four Lines Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:48:00 PM

Greg, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2015 6:00:00 PM

so descriptive Greg many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/24/2015 11:52:00 PM

Wonderful expressions Greg! Congrats on big win!

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:38:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2015 3:39:00 PM

I really like this one, so succinct and well rhymed. Congrats on your win.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:40:00 PM

Thanks for commenting on my poem.It is much appreciated

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/24/2015 7:56:00 AM

Well done! Grats on your win.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:43:00 PM

I always appreciate when you stop by, thanks

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2015 6:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Greg. Hugs Eve

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:44:00 PM

Thanks Eve, always like a hug

James Inman

Date: 9/23/2015 12:36:00 PM

Very nice, Greg.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:42:00 PM

Thank you James

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/22/2015 8:20:00 PM

Short, sweet and very neat writing. I like it ... CayCay

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thank you Cay Cay for commenting on my poem