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Fog from age settles in
Like a gloaming of night
Smothering from within
Extinguishing all light



Greg Hoffman
9/22/2015
Contest: Four Lines
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

Copyright © Greg Hoffman | Year Posted 2015

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September 28, 2015 at 9:48 PM

Greg, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**

September 26, 2015 at 6:00 PM

so descriptive Greg many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 24, 2015 at 11:52 PM

Wonderful expressions Greg! Congrats on big win!

September 25, 2015 at 9:38 PM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2015 at 3:39 PM

I really like this one, so succinct and well rhymed. Congrats on your win.

September 25, 2015 at 9:40 PM

Thanks for commenting on my poem.It is much appreciated

September 24, 2015 at 7:56 AM

Well done! Grats on your win.

September 25, 2015 at 9:43 PM

I always appreciate when you stop by, thanks

September 23, 2015 at 6:40 PM

Congratulations on your win,Greg. Hugs Eve

September 25, 2015 at 9:44 PM

Thanks Eve, always like a hug

September 23, 2015 at 12:36 PM

Very nice, Greg.

September 25, 2015 at 9:42 PM

Thank you James

September 22, 2015 at 8:20 PM

Short, sweet and very neat writing. I like it ... CayCay

September 25, 2015 at 9:41 PM

Thank you Cay Cay for commenting on my poem

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