No one else is there

Haunting thoughts are wandering, 
through the prison of your mind 

Yet it's the only company, 
you can seem to find 

Driving you insane, 
all you want to do is share

Releasing all inside, 
to have someone there to care
 
Instead an eerie silence, 
is all that fills the air 
 
Once again your all alone, 
No one else is there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Dear Ailsa, your imagery is truly emotive.. the feeling of loneliness and despair fill your verse.. the melancholy is palpable. A soulful, deeply expressive piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Wright Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 4:57 PM
Wow what wonderful and positive feedback, thank you so much. I hope you are well ??
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