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No Offense

Is that what you think? Is that what you know? Stories you've heard, time passed and consoled. Moments ended in a blink of an eye, All Hell breaks loose hoping you'll die. A blurry silence, But an extremely loud pain, Driving you crazy, Leaving a stain. All things good, gracious and true, Falling before you, bleeding you through. I raise my hands up to Heaven above, Fists shaking, with conviction and love. What have I done? Did I do something wrong? God must be furious and want me to fall. This is it, it must be the end. I lay down my head so I may not offend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/24/2021 3:28:00 PM
Interesting and deep. I like your style.
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Date: 2/23/2021 6:54:00 AM
Great poem! A lot of strong descriptive words are used. Cheers, Bridget :)
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Date: 1/17/2021 1:18:00 PM
So much pain and suffering here Alesha. A stirring piece, still, I do hope it is fiction. Peace to you; take care Alesha :)
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