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No Offence

I Sidney C Hall Have decided to stop writing The funnies and offending you all There will be no chicken eyed stare Or talks of underwear No farts, Butts Or mention of tarts My comments will be just Not talk of sizes in bust For this I truly say This is the last day I have been naughty and bad And now I am sad My intention is not to offend But I have one of my best friends

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Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 1:00:00 PM

cheer up! and thanks for the comment. Keep them poems rolling for all to see. thanxa 4 enjoying my latest'

Skat A

Date: 10/14/2010 9:10:00 PM

THERE GOES THE FUN. WHO SPOILED IT FOR US. HOPE YOU GET OVER IT*lv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2010 8:51:00 PM

wow! is this for that one contest, if so,,it is really intense. I truly feel bad for your thoughts. I am sure, you offended no one. Have a nice one,,and good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/14/2010 3:38:00 PM

Nice open confessions , Sidney, To laugh on oneself is the best laughter, enjoyed very much your wit and humor.

Des Juan Richardson

Date: 10/14/2010 12:07:00 PM

Sidney, don't change your style. This is what poetry is, expression. You are free to express your deepest thoughts, fears, as well as humor. Stay true to you. I enjoyed this write but surely hope you don't change. I enjoyed this piece and look forward to reading more. ~Des Juan~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/14/2010 11:08:00 AM

you will be ok...some enjoy your craziness.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/14/2010 9:46:00 AM

Hope this is not true Sidney.. and good luck with your Limerick in Matt's contest.. I just entered my own "UMPH" ... hope this one is for HG's contest .. u are full of fun ..cannot see u hurting anyone luv..