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No Need For the Sun

~ I looked for the sun on the eastern horizon Waved off the clouds that now stood in the way Whispered my thoughts through the leaves steady falling Longed for the beauty of dawn on display Then like a dream found the words you had written Smiled as my day once again had begun Wrote a reply in poetic lines stating When you are near there’s no need for the sun ~

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/7/2019 6:34:00 PM

G'day Chris ... romance is as powerful a reason to put all else in the background - thank you Chris - Lindsay

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 9:48:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one

Peter W Iversen

Date: 11/17/2019 6:40:00 PM

Very nice, upbeat and full of love.Peter

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thanks so very much Peter.

Christine Bialczak

Date: 11/13/2019 2:15:00 PM

Ironic that I randomly chose this poem of yours to read second! Definitely brought me back from the darker place I was left in. Very nice rhyme!

Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2019 2:21:00 PM

Thanks again Christine. Happy this one added a little light to the mood I assume was from reading Pale Shelter. You will find that this is my normal style, the other was the anomaly. : )

Pat Adams

Date: 11/12/2019 3:32:00 PM

Yes, this is a FAV for me as well. Very well written and rhymed. No amount of bad weather can override love. Well done my friend.........pat

Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 3:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Pat. I am happy you liked this one.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/12/2019 8:27:00 AM

This beautiful poem flows along like a little river, Chris! Janice

Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 8:34:00 AM

Thank you Janice. I am happy you liked this.

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/12/2019 7:21:00 AM

You're a beautiful day to see...Nice Chris

Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Arturo. I appreciate your kind thoughts.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2019 5:10:00 AM

- Words that warm like sunshine ... lovely written, Chris - Have a lovely Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/12/2019 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you stopped by and enjoyed this one.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/11/2019 3:20:00 PM

Please, please, please forgive me for what's coming, Chris, but reading this delightful poem, I feel I must state one obvious conclusion: "Dawn, go away. You're no good for me!" ~ Frankie Vallee

Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 3:29:00 PM

Loved it my friend, made me chuckle and here I didn't think I was writing about any of the seasons but I guess I did. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/11/2019 11:00:00 AM

I love this beautiful , positive poem Chris! I look forward to reading your poetry :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 12:16:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you stopped by.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/11/2019 10:14:00 AM

such beauty again flows from your muse... sounds like another cloudy day? it was a beautiful soft rise here this morning, it is supposed to change to gray skies later but it sounds as though you don't need to see the sunrise to enjoy some sunshine...good morning my friend, wonderful penning :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 10:50:00 AM

It is a cloudy day but fortunately that doesn't matter to me as long as I have good friends like you. Thank you so very much Sandy.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/11/2019 9:47:00 AM

The last two lines are so beautiful, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren. Good morning.