No Nap

No nap, no nap, no nap, she shouts
With all that she can muster;
At not-yet-2, though she insists,
She's much too young to trust 'er.

I put it off and read some books;
She helps and turns the pages.
I give a warning - just 2 more,
To hope that it assuages.

I pull the shade and pick her up
And in the crib I place her.
I gently shut the door and leave,
So I don't have to face her.

For how she howls! Indignant that
Her wish was not respected;
But in 5 minutes she's asleep,
About what I expected.

A little introduction to
The world, for, like today,
There'll be a million other times
She will not get her way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Leffanta Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 1:36 PM
You deftly described my granddaughter! Well done!
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:28 PM
i guess a lot of grandparents can relate to this, rico. thanks for taking the time to comment...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Oh what a touching write Ilene. Beautifully done. I love the depth you have woven into this wee story. 7 xomo!
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:27 PM
thank you so much, maureen! much appreciated...
Turner Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Wonderful Mrs Ilene. It is a hard lesson that must be taught. Left me smiling:)
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:27 PM
hey daniel! good to hear from you! thank you for reading and commenting...
Kinch  Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Brilliant write. I can see the defiance in your little ones face, oh those terrible twos, how I love them! This made me smile.
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:26 PM
thank you for that wonderful comment, elizabeth! you made me smile as well...
Green Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 12:50 PM
So cute and so true. Wonderfully written Ilene, just so genuine and I could see this. Oh and just so you know, I am sending this comment is in a whisper, don't want to wake her. :)
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:25 PM
ha! you didn't wake her, chris, but i was able to write this poem during her nap time, which was great. my husband and i babysit every friday, so i get lots of ideas for poems. thank you for your supportive comments...
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Such a charming tale that i know many parents can relate to. What a wonderful grandma you are:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:23 PM
thank you, jan! i'm a nana - there's also a grandma but it isn't me. i appreciate the comment...
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