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No Nap

No nap, no nap, no nap, she shouts With all that she can muster; At not-yet-2, though she insists, She's much too young to trust 'er. I put it off and read some books; She helps and turns the pages. I give a warning - just 2 more, To hope that it assuages. I pull the shade and pick her up And in the crib I place her. I gently shut the door and leave, So I don't have to face her. For how she howls! Indignant that Her wish was not respected; But in 5 minutes she's asleep, About what I expected. A little introduction to The world, for, like today, There'll be a million other times She will not get her way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/13/2017 1:36:00 PM
You deftly described my granddaughter! Well done!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/13/2017 5:28:00 PM
i guess a lot of grandparents can relate to this, rico. thanks for taking the time to comment...
Date: 5/12/2017 1:34:00 PM
Oh what a touching write Ilene. Beautifully done. I love the depth you have woven into this wee story. 7 xomo!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/13/2017 5:27:00 PM
thank you so much, maureen! much appreciated...
Date: 5/12/2017 1:12:00 PM
Wonderful Mrs Ilene. It is a hard lesson that must be taught. Left me smiling:)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/13/2017 5:27:00 PM
hey daniel! good to hear from you! thank you for reading and commenting...
Date: 5/12/2017 1:09:00 PM
Brilliant write. I can see the defiance in your little ones face, oh those terrible twos, how I love them! This made me smile.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/13/2017 5:26:00 PM
thank you for that wonderful comment, elizabeth! you made me smile as well...
Date: 5/12/2017 12:50:00 PM
So cute and so true. Wonderfully written Ilene, just so genuine and I could see this. Oh and just so you know, I am sending this comment is in a whisper, don't want to wake her. :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/13/2017 5:25:00 PM
ha! you didn't wake her, chris, but i was able to write this poem during her nap time, which was great. my husband and i babysit every friday, so i get lots of ideas for poems. thank you for your supportive comments...
Date: 5/12/2017 12:37:00 PM
Such a charming tale that i know many parents can relate to. What a wonderful grandma you are:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/13/2017 5:23:00 PM
thank you, jan! i'm a nana - there's also a grandma but it isn't me. i appreciate the comment...

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