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No More Tears

When you first left I could not cry I never shed a tear I found myself so all alone taken over by the fear I went for days my heart enslaved it was more than I could bare So hard for me to finally see my love you would not share Why is it when our hearts are broken we try so hard to find a token Just some little thing to hold on to a remembrance of a love once true I found a poem you wrote for me its purpose was so plain to see You spoke of love and life a new It made me want to cherish you I read it several times within and then again out loud It was then my heart did wither so as if covered by a shroud I remember falling to my knees and calling out your name I knew right then my life would change and never be the same I pulled myself up off the floor and ventured to the door and as I walked outside to breathe my tears began to pour I cried all day and into night I had no will I could not fight I cried so long and hard it seemed an endless flow of tears did stream Inside myself I went that day contented less yet doomed to stay I have not cried out loud since then I have no tears left here to spend Perhaps the day will come once more when I may venture out that door And lift this pain upon my heart Reach out and give new love a start... Contest: Tear Sponsored by Paula Swanson

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Date: 1/3/2011 8:15:00 AM
When I write a poem, it’s not by the comments that I allow my poems to be judged, although they are always welcome, but it’s in the reaction on someone’s face, how the words moved them emotionally. This is where the true gift of a poet comes to light, the ability to install emotions in someone else, through their own experiences. This write is very close to home for me at the moment, and I cried as I read this, thank you for sharing such an emotion heartfelt piece. Hope you are ok now? Alan x
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Sharon, I loved this the firs time and more the seond....luv Michael
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Date: 12/17/2010 12:05:00 PM
When you finally were able to cry, I hope it provided a release of the pent up emotion, Sharon. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:32:00 PM
A super write and entry Shar.. should be top of winner list with all the emotional lines and loving theme.. my friend.. good luck in the contest..
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:26:00 AM
Sharon, this is a beautiful write on moving on, and being hopeful that the pain of a broken heart will not last forever.. enjoyed this :) Enjoy your day, love Wilma
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Date: 12/15/2010 3:19:00 PM
Great entry and ure to be up at the top. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:35:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Shar. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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