No More Sunshine

Opened the curtains today
All I saw was gray
The weatherman said
There would be sunshine today
But not for me
It’s gray everyday in my heart
Ever since that day
The day you tore us apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 21, 2011 at 4:58 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Danielle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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April 20, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight .. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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April 20, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Hard to see the sushine when we surround ourselves with darkness. Excellent write.
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