No More Pain

Tears fall like morning rain
Trying to wash away your pain
It's ok, I'm not alone
The angels took me to their home

Try not to worry, dont be sad
I love you loads, dear mum and dad
Inner peace I hope you'll find
I'll never wander from your mind

Remember all the happy things
Like when you pushed me on the swings
Fond memories I know you'll share
Like the times you took me to the fair 

I'll always be your little girl
The one you brought into this world

So don't be sad, dont be afraid
Please tell all the friends I made
I love them all, they need not worry and not to forget me in a hurry

I'm feeling fine I have no pain 
1 day we'll all be together again.

William Duffy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/1/2014 3:13:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I'm so sorry to hear of your loss x I wrote this when a young girl was killed in an accident at school. I hope this does not offend anyone who has lost a child. I am lucky too have my daughters xx
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Date: 9/1/2014 3:03:00 PM
A heart wrenching poem. To lose a child is the worst kind of agony. I'm so sorry for your loss if you were writing about yours? I started writing humorous poems to entertain my son who was home a lot with illness (CF) He died when he was 13. Just getting interested in girls! Writing is a great way of dealing with grief. God Bless!
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Date: 9/1/2014 11:11:00 AM
This is a beautiful write-I find myself writing about death/addiction/depression as unfortunately those have been themes in my life. read my Depression or About you I had a dream poems at your leisure. :-) Christine
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