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No More 'Cold'

{This is a kind of response to the song 'Cold' by Black Country Communion} I did not mean to leave you 'cold' But you must understand This tragedy had to unfold Our lives have been pre-planned Our life together had to end It's time you accept this Think of all the fun we had, friend And then, me, you won't miss Please come out of your reverie I know you need to grieve I'll be a fading memory If you'll just let me leave I'm watching over you today From way beyond the blue So don't despair, grief will relay The strength to see this through You'll soon be warm, no more so 'cold' Just sing the blues away Go on livin', be brave and bold The rhythm of life you play

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Date: 8/23/2023 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joanna, you amply deserve it with this wonderful poem. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 8/1/2023 10:15:00 AM
"No More 'Cold'" is a creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a great day writing away.............
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