No More

You say your replying to immaturity but what does that make you
You think your little rhymes are going to somehow make me  blue
Baby girl I don’t think I'm better than you its something I know
Sweetie I’m number one I do nothing but glow
You say the talk is what’s holding you back
But I doubt it because real poetry is what you lack.
You say you can live without me and I’m happily fine with that 
Because deep down we both know your just a selfish brat
I was honestly done with you when I wrote my last rhyme
So quite reading my stuff if you don’t like it because your just wasting time
I hope your happy because you ruined something that could have been good
because of you I’m staying away like my family told me I should 
remember I’m not the one who came to you sweetie you texted me 
and as soon as your number popped up on my screen a snake is what I could see
you say I’m oh so immature but who prank calls people for attention?
lovebug that’s old school come up with a new invention
you come at me with all these words and call me fake 
but darling dear babygirl that’s a mistake
you call me a little girl and say I’m immature
home chick look in the mirror and you’ll know for sure
you say you have class and stepping to me wouldn’t be worth your while
come on now gurlie to come at me you’ll walk for miles and miles
you know absolutely nothing about me you think you do
and sadly you missed out on a friend who would have always been there a friend so true
so I’m done with your crap and I’m done with you 
so maybe when you decide to grow up we can start anew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Henderson Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Hey gurl... its been forever since you been on... i miss reading your work... post some more please
Hensley Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 1:44 PM
this is a great crazy poem! I hope you the best and be looking forward to more of these poems of yours!
Richardson Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Wow! I hope you don't stay away from the soup. Keep writing! ~Des Juan
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jonay. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Martinez Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 9:36 PM
wow jonay wow i knew u had it like that but wow i tell u thats mad crazy am gd am ur bestie n not ur hater cuz ur sumone not to mess wit but thats y i luv ya cuz u always cum wit it
Cantu Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Oh, I love reading this outloud, feels like fighting with a wall or an ugly painting jojojjo nice one nice one!! thanks for the experience =D
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Exellent use of ryhme and a very tight poem great work and really great flow And its a hell of smack haha to who its intended I love to read great rhyme and thats what this is great job jonay
K Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Ugh I hate when people are like that....great poem, made me laugh -Jessica
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