No Mercy

I don't need your mercy I got everything I need The knife is my friend it helps me Solving the problems you gave me My pillow are full of memories Words you used to say Things you did but everything is gone Just like you Time is moving on Maybe I should too? I will put away the knife if you find the door

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/11/2022 10:04:00 PM

"Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you."

Lost Feeling
Date: 5/2/2022 1:23:00 AM

Hey, thank you Even tho i don't belive in God, i say thank you for sharing.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/10/2022 8:50:00 PM

very intense verse,

Lost Feeling
Date: 5/2/2022 1:22:00 AM

Thank you, and yes. The poem are supposed to share a strong and intense feeling. I am glad you liked it