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No Man At All

I ask myself what did i do wrong But i came to realize it's not me it was him all along what will i do with this man who cant stay in one place do i stay, do i leave I cant call it it hurts so bad I just want to forget about all of it this man of mine is no man at all what is love if love dosen't love back what is hope when hope is so far away I have neither one he took them from me but i'll get them back just wait and see from this point on i'm going to love only me

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Skat A

Date: 6/9/2016 10:47:00 PM

Renee, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/2/2010 4:03:00 PM

Its so sad when the girl thinks it was her fault. most of the time it never is. great write. writing about your emotions is always key. -Forever Lynette

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 1/30/2010 9:31:00 AM

Wow. I feel your pain. Keep writing it helps to express it. I have a poem called "My Company" I invite you to read if you like. Thanks for sharing with me. Have a great day! Scarlett

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/30/2010 8:42:00 AM

i read this poem with my heart and i felt you and wanted to be with you. and give you words to comfort you. because you, like i had to learn how to love ourselves in order to feel loved. and it is a greater love that will never leave. John H Loving III