Renee Goswellin Poet Rhyme

No Man At All

I ask myself what did i do wrong

But i came to realize it's not me it was him all along

what will i do with this man who cant stay in one place

do i stay, do i leave I cant call it 

it hurts so bad I just want to forget about all of it

this man of mine is no man at all

what is love if love dosen't love back

what is hope when hope is so far away
 
I have neither one he took them from me

but i'll get them back just wait and see

from this point on i'm going to love only me

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Skat A June 9, 2016 at 10:47 PM Renee, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT

Lynette Chachere February 2, 2010 at 4:03 PM Its so sad when the girl thinks it was her fault. most of the time it never is. great write. writing about your emotions is always key. -Forever Lynette

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson January 30, 2010 at 9:31 AM Wow. I feel your pain. Keep writing it helps to express it. I have a poem called "My Company" I invite you to read if you like. Thanks for sharing with me. Have a great day! Scarlett

John Loving Iii January 30, 2010 at 8:42 AM i read this poem with my heart and i felt you and wanted to be with you. and give you words to comfort you. because you, like i had to learn how to love ourselves in order to feel loved. and it is a greater love that will never leave. John H Loving III