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No Luggage Space

the knock was heard twice and liking questions he asked 'someone at the door?' the sound came again this time from somewhere closer and he said 'hello?' there was no answer just another knock nearer he quizzed 'the back stair?' was it death he thought holding a smile and dreaming he asked 'friend or foe?' came the voice 'neither i am not of this world 'but another view' 'how well you did live love and learn to let it go is what matters most' 'not to me but you because you are the luggage nothing more to take' stan sand

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Date: 7/30/2019 1:05:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Sand Blown
Date: 7/30/2019 3:12:00 PM
oh man...you are much too kind
Date: 7/19/2019 1:01:00 AM
Absolutely right - why do the rich and powerful get so greedy, the only thing rich about their final journey is their coffin! Such an exact write. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/19/2019 2:37:00 AM
ya...it's going to be a speedy delivery : ) cofcofhmmph
Date: 7/18/2019 8:04:00 PM
Well constructed and just right length to keep interest. Not too much sand blasting. Have a great weekend. David in NZ
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Date: 7/18/2019 11:27:00 PM
sand-blasting...oh hey thank you : )
Date: 7/17/2019 5:23:00 PM
That's right. You can't, and you don't, take it with you, as they say. Two thumbs up for this one, Sand! Best wishes, Gershon
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Sand Blown
Date: 7/17/2019 7:16:00 PM
thanks...when the messanger comes knockin i hope i'm relaxed : )
Date: 7/16/2019 1:43:00 PM
That will be one crazy trip! No luggage...taking no one else...finding a new home.
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Date: 7/16/2019 3:10:00 PM
new home...he's leaving his self, the world behind... nirvana maybe : )

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