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No Longer Jane Doe

I saw her cry Like she never cried before I never thought that losing me would be a big effect on her As the detective holds her back I try to speak But the words to her never reached I was gone for one day With my friends To the beach to feel the sand Not once knowing how i awake The accident Had my breath be take Now its been two weeks since And my mom finds me Crying at death For not knowing her daughter was the one dying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/5/2010 2:24:00 PM
Touching write Teeya, deep and powerful. always Michael
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