No Longer Jane Doe

I saw her cry
Like she never cried before
I never thought that losing me would be a big effect on her
As the detective holds her back
I try to speak
But the words to her never reached
I was gone for one day
With my friends
To the beach to feel the sand
Not once knowing how i awake
The accident 
Had my breath be take
Now its been two weeks since 
And my mom finds me
Crying at death
For not knowing her daughter was the one dying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 5, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Touching write Teeya, deep and powerful. always Michael
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