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6/28/2026 for Phoenix Sixain only Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards 

No Light, No Girl

In the course of the events of man,
a boy grown old could never understand. 
There was no more light, no more curl
in the events of an insect and a girl -
the boy, now gone, and the tot he couldn't save -
events, a boy, light, a girl, gone. 

inspired by "After Watching 'The Grave of the Fireflies'" , the poem, in double quotes by the author of this poem, the film, italicized, in single quotes, directed by Isao Takahata
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Smith  Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 12:42 AM
These phoenix sixain forms do give a poem a new path.
Crandall Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 10:30 AM
I tried quite a few of my poems and had a hard time with it - I couldn't get the last line didn't quite work on most. Sometimes, I have a hard time understanding that poems don't have to follow the same grammatical rules.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 3:32 PM
So interesting, David. Tell me again how I can see that movie. It seems to really inspire you. I live when movies do that for me
Crandall Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Hmm, I'm not sure. I got it as a DVD from the library here in my retirement community. It's a Japanese animation movie, but my DVD was in English. I think it's from 1988, but I also think it's a pretty famous movie, so maybe you can stream somewhere, or pick it up in some library. It's a sad movie.
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